Published in Go Into The Story·1 hour agoHappy Birthday, Go Into The Story!Launched on May 16, 2008, here we are 5,000+ days of blogging later… but what does it all mean? Fourteen years ago, I was a TV producer and had no idea that in August of that year, I would begin an eight year stint as a visiting lecturer at the…Blogging4 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·2 hours agoReflections on The Write RetreatHow working with eleven writers from Europe and the Middle East inspired me… and drove home some writing truths. From April 22–26, I was a guest of The Write Retreat in Mallorca, Spain. During that time I worked with each writer or writing duo on their creative projects. It was…Creativity5 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·3 hours agoScript Analysis: “The Tender Bar” — Part 1: Scene-By-Scene BreakdownA week-long analysis of the 2021 drama starring Ben Affleck and directed by George Clooney. Reading scripts. Absolutely critical to learn the craft of screenwriting. The focus of this bi-weekly series is a deep structural and thematic analysis of each script we read. Our daily schedule: Monday: Scene-By-Scene Breakdown Tuesday: Plot Wednesday…Movies23 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·4 hours agoOn Writing“Artists have a vested interest in our believing in the flash of revelation, the so-called inspiration…[shining] down from heavens as a ray…Writing1 min readOn Writing
Published in Go Into The Story·5 hours agoPage One: “Lucy” (2014)Written by Luc Besson The movie version of the opening: This Page One raised somewhat of a ruckus on Twitter: Granted, New Courier is the standard font in Hollywood, but…Movies1 min readPage One: “Lucy” (2014)Written by Luc BessonThe movie version of the opening:This Page One raised somewhat of a ruckus on Twitter:Granted, New Courier is the standard font in Hollywood, but…11
Published in Go Into The Story·1 day agoVideo: How Aaron Sorkin Creates Musical DialogueThis 7-minute video analyzes Sorkin’s dialogue in the opening scene of The Social Network and reveals an interesting dynamic in his writing: Rhythm. Recently, this Insider video from 2022 traversed my social media timeline. It’s a really good watch. It goes into great detail analyzing the opening scene in The…Screenwriting9 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·1 day agoGo Into The Story Resource: Movie Script Scene-By-Scene BreakdownsGo Into The Story followers are contributing breakdowns of contemporary screenplays to an ongoing script analysis series. On May 16, 2022, Go Into The Story turns 14 years old — you can read the very first blog post here. I led with this paragraph: Welcome to Go Into The Story…Movies4 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·1 day agoProtagonist v. Nemesis: Keys to ConflictThe simplest way to imbue a story with a strong, central conflict is to have your Protagonist confront a Nemesis. Your choice of a Protagonist is easily one of the most critical decisions you make because of the character’s dominant influence on a story: The Protagonist usually goes on some…Storytelling3 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·1 day agoGreat Scene: “Rocky”How budget issues helped to create the memorable ice rink scene. A while back, I was talking with a friend Kevin Wild and asked him for a Great Scene suggestion. He said, “Hey, you should do some that came about because of budget issues.” And he immediately thought of the…Movies3 min read
Published in Go Into The Story·1 day agoPage One: “Luca” (2021)Screenplay by Jesse Andrews & Mike Jones, story by Enrico Casarosa & Jesse Andrews & Simon Stephenson, story consultant Julie Lynn &…Movies1 min readPage One: “Luca” (2021)22