Tola, great choices. I noticed that setup and payoff re a guy bragging in a bar room. It’s not only a setup, it also is a writing trick. The fact Dixon just happens to be in the car when the supposed rapist just happens to be bragging about his criminal exploits is a HUGE COINCIDENCE. One way to deal with that? Embrace it in a BIG WAY. So, have Willoughby state the EXACT CIRCUMSTANCES of the Crop Haired Man / Dixon / Bar Scene.

“Penelope said begets” — great line.

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